NON-SCP WRITINGS / Discussion

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Beta Vulgaris 13 May 2021 09:05

androgynous-appearing

androgynity is an appearance, the, "-appearing," is unnecessary

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Beetroot

Beta Vulgaris 20 May 2021 09:21

they grasped ahold of the woman's arm, tugging her into the house and locking the door behind them.

whether the final, "them," is p'ural, or singu'ar, is hard, to tell, without reading, over it, multiple times. To provide smoother reading, I suggest, that it be rep'aced, with, "her," or another p'ural pronoun

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Beetroot