This is a very very rough draft about three bugs that blow up. 3.6k words, ~13min read. I'd been working on this draft on and off for the past 5 months. I'd written each section out of order, so I feel very iffy on it. Please be as harsh on this draft as you want! Here's some guiding questions:
1. Do the bugs feel enough like their own character?
2. ^ with Shing, Day, and Tina
3. Does the progression make sense?
4. Is the ending good enough? That's the issue I was struggling with the most (and what I was fighting with for most of those 5 months)
5. Do you feel like you need to read the previous tale to understand this SCP? I tried my best to make it work independently, but the emails might rely a bit much on them
6. Is the talk between Day and Shing at the end too much?
how tf do I do css on this