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possum_punkpossum_punk 26 Aug 2026 21:50
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banged this one out right quick !

thanks 2 me crittahs:

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by possum_punkpossum_punk, 26 Aug 2026 21:50

🐟🐟🐟wow🐟🐟🐟, 🐟🐟🐟goicon!!🐟🐟🐟

Thank you so much to battlecruiser12battlecruiser12 for both coming up with the idea for United Seas and for inviting me and MetalRavioliMetalRavioli to write for them.

The idea for United Seas came from FISCP(H). So, if you think about it real hard, this is also a fishcon🐟 entry.

Thank you, as always, to my critters:

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Alternate Title: WE NEED TO KILL GEORGE BUSH

rahh, chaos insurgency format! This was mainly an exercise in writing an Insurgency format, as I plan to write a longer (and more serious) one later on in this series.

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nothing (guest) 23 Jul 2026 10:11
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Hey! I saw your post and thought it was kind of you to do this for the user that coldposted the original TvT

by nothing (guest), 23 Jul 2026 10:11

Things to maintain:

  • Thereven
  • Athena
  • Gods currently mentioned
  • Athena becoming a part of AWD
  • Ezra involvement

Ideas for rewrite:

  • Pull forward into Day era. Ritual was discovered right before Ezra era during a Chaos Insurgency fight. The Insurgency was using it to summon war gods, and put Sekhmet into a stolen Foundation mecha. AWD fights the mecha, captures Sekhmet and locks her up, and takes the ritual for themselves.
  • Ezra uses it for a bit, fails to make anything of worth outside of Klymene. Shelved until Day, new run with Klymene and Farhat. Ends with Athena being produced. Focus a lot more on Athena becoming a member of AWD
  • needs a better ending than just Athena joining AWD. Something showing the impact her presence has.
  • need to come up with a list of gods i want referenced, i also want it to be more than just they try to summon and it fails. some more hijinks happen. maybe another god is summoned before Athena and they keep them around even though they're not useful at all
  • could also use gods to show difference between eras. Ezra's run just summons whatever with no clear focus in what gods they're summoning, while Day's run goes for gods that could be related to weaponry, war, strategy, etc

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rewrite concept by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 11 Jul 2026 03:19

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Author Profile: Post! by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 05 Jul 2026 12:27
TopDownUnderTopDownUnder 26 Jun 2026 23:37
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topdownunder dares to ask the bold question: what if the professor was a lesbian

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coldcoleslawcoldcoleslaw

posted a comment without thinking it through. I can't delete my own comment, so this is the next best thing.

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Decided on a -1.
fullbaked opinion in here. collapsed because it's a bit long.
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demolitionderpydemolitionderpy

feels half baked and is trying way too hard to garner an emotional response it doesn't deserve.
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Jamz9245Jamz9245

Seconded.
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Dr BlackboxDr Blackbox

I was pretty excited to see AW back but nothing really comes of it. It doesn't really do anything with the character beyond introducing a wife who herself also doesn't really do anything.
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TopDownUnderTopDownUnder

Nora has been a part of AW's lore since SCP-300
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VuMinhNgocVuMinhNgoc

Seconding this
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orangeninja27orangeninja27

Nothing inherently bad with this, but it's too short and it doesn't really… justify itself, I suppose? It just kind of exists and does a thing. It's a great concept, but feels more like an Anomalous Object than a full-on SCP, at least in its current state. Novote.
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Dr AngellDr Angell

I love the premise of this, but I can’t help but feel like it’s missing something.

“We can see the beauty of the world, even if it can't see ours,” is such a poignant queer message, and the telescope only seeing various shots of the Earth from different angles on the moon is clever, but the item is simply doing what is on the inscription. It’s repeating itself, rather than expanding. Just adding a small detail that goes beyond the stated theme would take this from good to great.
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froghopperfroghopper

1) You are not even close to the threshold where increasing the amount of "stuff" in an article detracts from it.
2) In my opinion, ultra-shortposts work if they leave something haunting around the reader, which extends and complicates the experience of the article. Your article's concept is wistful, warm, and most importantly resolved—-being of love long done. This contributes to the feeling-small of it.

That being said, what this article does have is great. I found it pleasant to read and am likely partially voting this way because I am disappointed that it ended.
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Jamz9245Jamz9245

For me this simply doesn't have enough substance. You're trying to get us attached to the characters without actually telling us anything about them, or linking their lives to the skip itself. It feels underdone and overly vague.
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WynthsWynths

i think it's okay to just say that the world is beautiful without further expanding on it
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IcePhoenix44IcePhoenix44

I downvoted this a while back, but thought there are potential in this article so I decided to put a comment here.

Like Dr Angell said, the message is very poignant and nice, however, it is literally explained to the reader by a "note at the end" which is one of my pet peeves in articles. I also do think the effect of the telescope could have a stronger link with the message, especially about the part of how the world can't see the beauty of queer people. Maybe from the perspective of a meteorite, or smth frequently neglected I don't know. The moon is like a really big symbol of love across the world and I don't think it fits the criteria of something the world cannot see the beauty of.

 luodekaerluodekaer 25 Jun 2026, 22:49

This article kind of stops suddenly. It feels shallow and could use more substance.
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MerehrabMerehrab 26 Jun 2026, 12:26

Surprised this is still in the positive digits and barely clinging onto life. Honestly, I think you need to go back to the drawing board with this one. It's definitely missing some depth in order to get its theme across. It's got a poignant message, but nothing is done with that message other than simply stating it without actually putting the effort in to make such a message feel evocative and emotionally resonating. And I'm especially disappointed that you included a deep cut character on the wiki, Professor AW, and then you don't even do anything with that character other than have her be a lesbian. "What if the professor was a lesbian" is in fact the most depth that this article ever gives in execution. I don't think it's worth letting this stay up in its current state IMO.

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by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 26 Jun 2026 23:37
TopDownUnderTopDownUnder 23 Jun 2026 04:32
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » "A World Away"

Take two on this SCP. I appreciate everyone who left comments on the initial version, I have taken them all to heart and then my heart spat this out.

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by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 23 Jun 2026 04:32
by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 19 Jun 2026 17:17
TopDownUnderTopDownUnder 18 Jun 2026 23:50
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Awd Parasite

Sad yuri, workaholic. Akabi and Farhat's relationship strains, but they still love eachother. Cast doubt on AWD and Day. Bounce between therapy session and actual SCP file. Way to interject Akabi remembering their relationship.
An SCP where a thaumic parasite latches onto a member of AWD's Occult Studies Division (Dr. Farhat al-Halaby) and AWD uses it as a weapon, at the expense of its host

Dr. Farhat al-Halaby: Foundation thaumaturgist. Farhat has had a relatively mundane career at the Foundation — no major successes or failures to report. Originally a member of the Applied Thaumatology Department, she worked as a consult for other departments, namely AWD's Occult Studies division. Following the re-opening of AWD, she was approached by Jimmy Day and invited to join the new Department. She happily accepted, despite her wife's protests. Even though she's been with the Foundation for well over a decade now, she still feels fresh to everything, and is more than eager to prove herself.

Director Jimmy Day: The current Director of AWD. Jimmy is shrouded in mystery. He's been with the Foundation for a long time, longer than his appearance would let on. There are records of him having worked in other Departments, such as the Applied Force Department and Archival Department, but no one in these departments can recall having ever worked with him. Still, he was handpicked by both the O5 Council and the Ethics Committee to revitalize AWD, and he's been doing a good job at that. Jimmy is generally overly friendly and positive, doing his best to make time to socialize with his staff.

Dr. Akabi Hayk: Foundation therapist, parapsychologist, and psychiatrist. Hayk serves many roles at the Foundation, but her main concern is the mental wellbeing of both its staff and prisoners. She was Ezra's personal therapist during his time as Director, and did her best to try and steer him from the path he followed. After his disappearance, Akabi moved to Site-225 until Jimmy restarted AWD. She didn't want to return to Area-34, already knowing how stressful it would be, but one major thing forced her: her wife. Marrying Farhat was easily the best thing she'd ever done in her life, even if her family back home didn't fully agree. She was a little upset when Farhat accepted the invitation to join AWD, but at least they got a nice apartment in a nearby city. Akabi puts on a nice face with everyone at AWD, but she harbors a deep distrust for Jimmy.

Summary: Pearl Neptunia Langstrum (She/Her) is generally professional but will be a little autistic goober at any given opportunity. She primarily works as the therapist at Site-3. She's 6'5 btw. She a tall gal.
While she's primarily a therapist, she can be used in pretty much anything since she has ALOT of free time.
Birthday: February 12th
Favourite Song: "American Dream Come True" by Moon Walker
Favourite Food: Waffles
Favourite Colour: Pink / Blue
Favourite Location: Anglesey, Wales
Favourite Subject: Psychology
Favourite Person(s): Her girlfriends

XXXX is a semi-non-corporeal entity that feeds on EVE (magic energy) (EVE is the fundamental energy that powers thaumatology. What EVE is, we are still trying to understand. It appears to be somehow linked to the Observer Effect directly. It has been described as 'life energy,' or 'magical particles,' but such terms are gross oversimplifications. If you are interested in the more esoteric aspects of EVE theory, you will find some recommended reading in your seminar syllabus. But for now, I will simply discuss the aspects of EVE that are pertinent to a Coalition field agent.

"EVE is emitted by living things. It is also often emitted by paranormal objects. EVE emission is not a perfect indication of whether or not a person or object has paranormal properties, but often, that is the case. Higher and more intense levels of EVE are generated by beings with higher levels of sapience: their Observer Effect is stronger, thus their EVE levels are stronger as well. Humans over Animals, Animals over Plants.). XXXX is visible only by potent thaumaturges or Etheric Resonance Imagery (ERI). Like all ERI devices, VERITAS functions by detecting the distinctive Aetheric Energy Fields (AEF), or Elan Vital Energy (EVE) given off by living creatures during the course of normal life functions. By measuring the wavelengths and intensity of these energy fields, information regarding the nature of the life form, its mental and physical state, and any paranormal alterations can be determined.

The Foundation knew vaguely about XXXX before this event, but didn't know if it ever/still existed and how to contain it. Hence why they're so surprised when it's attracted by the weapon testing and it attaching to Farhat.

need to figure out class. Keter? Hera (Item is hostile but very useful to the Foundation.)?
start with therapy log. pearl asks if akabi hayk is ready, Akabi remarks that she hasn't been on this side of the chair in a long time. pearl asks akabi to tell her what the session is for, just so it's on the record. Segue to flop header, conprocs, and description. discovery/Farhat al-Halaby incident addendum too. AWD is doing some unrelated tests on a thaumaturgic weapon, it attracts XXXX, which attaches itself to Farhat. then back to therapy, where pearl asks if it's about hayk's wife. They talk about their relationship before XXXX, then cut to addenda about farhat's history at the Foundation, then a debrief with her shortly after the incident (like within hours). Therapy about immediate impact of the incident on their relationship, then testing/dialogue logs. Jimmy takes interest in Farhat and XXXX, which leads Farhat to pushing her limits and hiding how badly XXXX is affecting her. Akabi notices, cause of course, and this leads to strain on their relationship. Akabi pleads for Farhat to get a better grip on XXXX or find a way to detach it from herself, but Farhat refuses, claiming that this is the first time she's been able to do something meaningful at the Foundation, to prove her worth beyond what's essentially a magic repairwomen. Farhat sees Akabi as jealous of her newfound importance, as Akabi's the one who was always in the spotlight (SCP-6776, SCP-7018, etc). Maybe XXXX is influencing her slightly to want to keep it?

Only issue I have now is figuring out the ending and how to bridge that gap. Akabi and Farhat stay together, even if the marriage is very tense now, Farhat stays alive with XXXX attached to her. Maybe it could end on the last bit of the therapy log where Pearl asks Akabi if she still loves Farhat, and Akabi says "Of course." Also need to find somewhere in the middle for Akabi to talk about how her and Farhat met (need to rewrite it so it's from her POV/she's the one telling it to Pearl):

It was a Foundation Conference. Akabi had been sent as a representative of the Parapsychology's European Branch. Despite that, she wasn't the best at English. She had assumed French would be the lingua franca, but she should've expected more from an organization originating in the States. Still, she knew just enough of the language to survive.

It was after all the main presentations. Akabi was eating alone in Site-19's mess hall. Despite being well-known back home, she knew no one here. She had assumed this would be the case, but she hadn't prepared for how awful it would feel. Still—

A tap on her shoulder. Akabi turned, seeing an unfamiliar face. She had been one of the presenters. Akabi glanced down at her name tag. 'Dr. Farhat al-Halaby.' Department of Thaumaturgy.

"Do you mind if I join you?" She asked, holding up her plate.

"Um," Akabi stammered. "Më vjen keq—" No, try at least a little. "Sorry, my English is not the best."

Farhat shrugged and sat down anyways. "That's okay. I am not good at English either. We're the same-same."

Akabi laughed softly, a faint blush creeping on her cheek. Farhat smiled at this, reaching over to nudge her. "Vous parlez français?"


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by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 18 Jun 2026 23:50
possum_punkpossum_punk 13 Jun 2026 02:31
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Crack 3

"crick fiction" has my vote


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by possum_punkpossum_punk, 13 Jun 2026 02:31

Bellerverse tale! I mean, Chaos On The Monolith tale! Err, CODENAME: Green King tale? Wait, Greg tale? …all of the above?

This was originally supposed to be just a crossover between Green King and Bellerverse, but then Greg and something else wormed their way in there. This was also just supposed to be a single tale, but it quickly spiraled out of control. I already have the second part halfway done, so this won't end up like my other Tale series, I promise!

Thank you, as always, to my amazing critters:

As always with Bellerverse tales, there's some references here to SCPs. In the spirit of the older Bellerverse tales, I haven't linked any of them. Two of them are very obvious, two are not. I'll send $5 - $5 to whoever finds it first.

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by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 18 May 2026 22:43

A fake town that multiple people remember. When they get together the idea of the town becomes more solidified as they further disregard the present. They become unable to distinguish this fake town from reality, refusing to accept anything that doesn't fit in it. Eventually people who get so far in the dream "return home," running into the woods or empty fields where they vanish.

Meant to be a metaphor for how fascism/conservativism uses nostalgia for propaganda "the good old days"

Horse a with no name


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by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 18 May 2026 18:47

banned


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by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 10 May 2026 16:28

are you drafting your autyhor post here


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by Mystical AWBMystical AWB, 10 May 2026 16:27
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swag by possum_punkpossum_punk, 07 May 2026 17:25
Mystical AWBMystical AWB 06 May 2026 21:20
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this is shit


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by Mystical AWBMystical AWB, 06 May 2026 21:20

This is an attempt at an SCP set in the Bellerverse canon. If you haven't read the canon, all you really need to know is that it takes place 4,000 years after a massive apocalypse that wiped out the majority of the world, most of the Foundation included. It's very much a fantasy Dying Earth setting. My main concerns are:

1. Does this work as an SCP?
2. Do you get enough of an idea of what The Red Chamber is/what's in it? ||Is there enough to allude to a Pattern Screamer?||
3. Is the Final Accord too heavy-handed?
4. Is the tone consistent?
5. Is the formatting alright?

http://lspr.wikidot.com/topbeller


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Questions for critters by TopDownUnderTopDownUnder, 06 May 2026 15:42
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